First of all, I really like the concept of your business. I think your text is great! It really makes me think...I need this, I need someone to create this for me. I'm too busy and my photos are piling in a box so I would love for someone to put a scrapbook together and organize my photos. I do agree with Alice, it's a little dark in my opinion too. Like I said, the wording is good but a lighter background would be nice. Good Luck! I think you're off to a great start!!!