I too think it looks a little dark - almost goth in a way. That's perfect if your clients mainly enjoy goth art work, but it seems that you want to appeal to a variety of clients. You might also want to have the pages seen larger. I feel I am missing your craftsmanship in the smaller pics.
Do you offer package deals whereby someone can request a few pages to celebrate a life event? Like a birth or graduation? In today's economy, I would think that a 3 page package might be a great way to continue to add to the family album. in my business, we are doing okay with the small jobs, since the large ones are further apart.
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